Our new plan for our new thriller

We have produced a new plan for our short thriller scene, as the last one we planned and film didnt seem acceptable for it to be shown to audiences. I and my partner had began doing deeper research to see what actually makes a good thriller so that it will enable us to apply it to our own. We watch different thrillers and deeply analysed each one so that we become mindful of what we need to do to achieve our goal. From our last thriller we produced we saw that we needed to include more action and a range of different carmera shots to show the weakness and the power in individual characters in the scene. Moreover, the things that are occuring in our thiller scene must change to allow it to become highly suitable to the genre we are set to approach.